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A Vicious Course

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Frightening.

Cold.

Enshrouded.

Never-ending.

Uncomforting.

Despairing.

Lonely.

Plunging deeper,
Into my abyss,
I am lured.
Taunting shadows,
Bellow at the struggle,
Of my screams that are unheard.

My savior,
Who kept a precious candlelight aglow,
You spoke gently then departed,
Leaving what I had unguarded,
Now darkness clutches greedily at the shards,
And engulfs what you started.
Yay venting through written words! :D
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Trudos's avatar
This is written very well! The emotion and the style complement each other perfectly. I also like the different formats used at the top to convey a different feeling for each word